Tuesday, June 15, 2010
Thanks for submitting [title withheld] to us. I'm going to respectfully pass on this piece. You got a great voice here but the story isn't firing on that emotional level for me. However, I meant what I said about your voice, some truly brilliant things happening there. I'd like to invite you to submit again in the future.
It's hard to even be disappointed after hearing something like that. I think I will submit again once I've written something better.